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Post by nahla rose on Oct 27, 2012 18:53:39 GMT -5
MOON AND SEA PENDANT: MAGICAL ITEM
This was given to Nahla by her mother when she was a baby. It's symbols of the moon and sea. While looking like a plain old pendant, it is enchanted to add +10 hp on any white magic she uses while it is active. But once the pendant has been activated, any black or arcane magic Nahla tries to cast will be forced to back fire, limiting her arsenal to white, time and green magic and physical attacks. Pendant also increases the effects of restorative items on Nahla by +5 hp per item. Effects last one post after activation. 4 post cooldown.
DANCING WAVES: SIGNATURE ABILITY
Nahla pulls any water she can to her before launching an attack mixing her martial arts skills and water and daggers of ice. Causes -10 Hp in damage and inflicts Paralysis. Once per thread. 3 command deck slots,
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Post by Lightning Farron | on Oct 27, 2012 20:00:40 GMT -5
Okay, a few things! c: 1) When you say +10 Magic, that kind of needs a unit of measurement. It could be +10 HP but that only works for White Magic, as Time and Green Magics don't inflict or restore damage. If you could go into a little more depth as to what that bonus is for each school of magic, then I'll check that one over again. x) 2) Also, I need a quantity on the "increase of restorative items" on Nahla. +5 HP restored per item? Something like that~ 3) I'm a little bit unclear as to what the "25% more damage" in Dancing Waves is, as there's no value to apply it to. 25% more damage than what? I'd advise just putting an HP Damage count on that one. Otherwise it looks okay, though depending on the HP damage I might ask you to bump it up to three slots.
Thanks~!
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Post by nahla rose on Oct 30, 2012 0:24:53 GMT -5
OK that is modified
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