Valhalla's Light

[Claire "Lightning" Farron]

MAGIC ITEM

Circle Shield: Once Per Thread the Circle Shield can create a magical barrier that protects Lightning from all damage for a brief amount of time, exactly 1.5 posts worth of damage immunity.

SIGNATURE ABILITY

Legion of One - Lightning's armor and weapon glow gold with the innate power of Etro as Lightning executes this move, powering up her offensive and speed capabilities to their maximum potential. Lightning moves forward and in a series of flips, kicks, slashes, and gun shots, assaults all her enemies on the field until either she grows tired or all her enemies are put down. Deals 25HP worth of damage to one target and does 5HP drain to all surrounding enemies. Can only be used once per thread and takes up 2 Command Slots.

(Hope I did this right)

[Lightning Farron |]

Looks good, but I've got a few small things!
1: The Circle Shield's duration needs a specific number, not an approximate range x) You could pick one, one and a half, or two posts. Two posts might be a little on the GM end though, so I'd suggest 1 - 1.5.
Also, it's probably just as an item description but I still wanted to let you know that shields don't really do anything when they're equipped on TWH. Your amount of dodges is the same with or without; its magic item ability is basically the only bonus it'll net you.
2: Legion of One needs a cooldown and the number of Command Deck slots it will take. For what you'd have, I'd suggest either once per thread and 2 CD Slots, or like 8-10 posts and 3 CD slots, if that makes sense.
pending !
Just make those edits and I'll take another look! ♥ Thanks!

[Claire "Lightning" Farron]

Modified. Took all advice.

Thanks~ <3