Rayde's Item&Ability

[Rayde]

Magical Item

Power Ring: Just what it says, a ring that grants power. It was originally a memento of his sister with no magical properties but the diamonds laced into the metal band absorbed some of Eroas' power when it banished Rayde from his world. Here in this new world, it boosts Rayde's physical attacks by 10%.

Signature Ability

Inner Power: Within Rayde lies a dormant power that can be awakened when the body is in danger. When released, Rayde's physical and magical attacks gain a power boost as well as his defense. This pushes Rayde's body to the limit and tires him out for a bit after use. Must take a minimum of 50 HP damage before activating.

Boosts: Power(attacks and techniques), Magic(spells and elemental strikes) and Defense(damage reduction) by 10%.
Duration/Cooldown: 3 posts/5 posts. Becomes fatigued after usage; techniques & magic are locked for 1 post, action limit halved for 2 posts. If used twice in one thread, penalties are doubled. If used a third time in one thread, Rayde will fall unconscious after usage.

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I added the defense as an afterthought, I can remove it if it's too much.

[admin]

Hmm. It looks good - I really like how the penalties multiply depending on the usage, and I have only one question; does the boost of his magic item and signature ability stack together? Remember that bonuses stack multiplicatively. Otherwise, everything is... APPROVED!

[Rayde]

Inner Power: Within Rayde lies a dormant power that can be awakened when the body is in danger. When released, Rayde's physical and magical attacks gain a power boost as well as his defense. This pushes Rayde's body to the limit and tires him out for a bit after use. Must take a minimum of 50 HP damage before activating.

Boosts: Power(attacks and techniques), Magic(spells and elemental strikes) and Defense(damage reduction) by 50%.
Duration/Cooldown: 3 posts/5 posts. Becomes fatigued after usage; techniques & magic are locked for 1 post, action limit halved for 3 posts. If used twice in one thread, penalties are doubled. If used a third time in one thread, Rayde will fall unconscious after usage.

[admin]

Revised version is APPROVED!
Have fun!